-Growing-
alone in its garden of
-Concrete-
knowledge that it brings a peace
that no one can
-Refuse-
scattered about the ground.
Cups, butts, plastic
-Wrapping-
the world in its leaves.
And the cars go
-Driving-
against the wind,
branches whipping the sky of
-Steel-
buildings of this forest.
Buildings and a tree
-Growing-
#411, in which the weary world rejoices
7 years ago
2 comments:
Wow, I really like that. It's such a nice circle.
Eternal if you will.
:-)
I like that, too! You said you thought it needed work, so would you mind a suggestion or two? I really like the way you made those few words stand out and the flow that results from it. Perhaps you could somehow tie those words in to one another? Or give them a common theme? Even with out that, it's really fun to read!
~K
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